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Sara Khayat's avatar

I love the softness of this

glittery cinnamon's avatar

floored by this

Metaphysical Builder's avatar

Thank you @glittery. I would love to hear more of what drew you to the poem, what floored you?

I wrote it with an intense feeling. Can you help me ride that horse?

glittery cinnamon's avatar

The purity of this inversion, it is stomach flipping

Metaphysical Builder's avatar

It feels for me very scary to write like this. Your comment is important to me.